Thursday, October 25, 2012

Plot summary

Plot summary:
  • After she is saved from a near-death experience she encountered at the age of eight by members of the Descent - a rebel group made up of humans (or what the wiccans deem as scum), Mercy is taken in to be raised as one of their own; trained in the ways of an assassin, and brainwashed to detest the wiccan community that had tossed humans aside when their wiccan lord, King Varen assumed the throne to Roschworth forty years ago.
  • When King Varen dies unexpectedly twelve years later, leaving his young son, Van, to rule the kingdom instead, a plan to overthrow the new ruler of Roschworth is drawn. One that forces Mercy to infiltrate the base of the wiccan court, by posing as a helper, before assassinating their ruler.
  • There are more to the tragedies and secrets the wiccan court holds however, and as Mercy proceeds with her plan, she begins to uncover that not everything is as it seem; whether it is with the the wiccans, or the humans she trusts. There are spies among the palace, those that may know her true identity and those that hope to see her fail in her mission. Getting close enough to Van is not as easy as she hopes either, for the man is often shrouded in his own darkness.
  • The main climax of the story occurs when Mercy finds herself tied between the truth and what she believes in, and has to decide once and for all what she ought to do for the best of everyone that lives in Roschworth. 
Research:

  • Inspiration: Salem witch trials, medieval times, royal court, assassins, rebellions, mythical beasts. From books: Sword of truth series, Infernal devices trilogy, Warriors series.
  • Areas that could be further developed in: The culture of the people in Roschworth, the politics in Roschworth, stories, myths and history of Roschworth that the humans in Descent learn about.

Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Scene 1


Prologue

   There was something odd about the wind that day.

   Often, the breeze would be alive, picking up in speed as it rushed past the dense undergrowth, only to slow down when it had reached its peak. But that was not the case then, Brayton noted as he crouched behind the wild grass shrouding him. There had been a continuous upwind draft wafting up his nostrils ever since he had lain in that position, and judging from the duration he had been crouching there, something was wrong.

    Very wrong.

    It was as though the skies above were trying to send him a message, warning him that something ominous was stirring beyond the cover of the trees’ thick canopy. Yet even so, the boy felt no fear of the shadows. Instead, they seemed to entice him, the foreign scents he caught scent of, drawing him forward and closer to the boundaries he was warned of. His curiosity was piqued, and nothing but moving forward would be able to satiate him.

   Slowly, he shifted his weight from his forearms to his legs, lifting himself off the grass with as minimal sound as he could manage. Once he was back on his two feet, he then began to stalk towards the trees, his beady eyes scanning furtively for any signs of the dangers the wind had mentioned.

    There was nothing though.

    For the first five minutes of his journey, all he ran into was a huge mess of unkempt vegetation – thorn bushes that lay in his path, and vines that hung from the steady branches overhead. The only thing that was vaguely suspicious was the soft buzzing sounds that rang in his ear, and even that seemed negligible. Disgruntlement coursed through him as he thought back to the promise of an adventure he had been given.

   How cheated he felt.

    If only he had known earlier, he would have resisted his inquisitiveness and continued crouching by the grass, waiting for his hare trap to spring. But as it was, he had not, and as a result, he had wasted his time, struggling to search for something that was not even there in the first place. He was such a fool, a complete imbecile.

   It was then though, when for the first time, he heard a moan – a vague noise that barely penetrated the whole forest. Brayton froze, not quite sure if it had been a moment of folly, or a real plea.

    “Hello?” he called out uncertainly, taking another step forward. “Is anyone there?”

   Hoping to at least catch a trace of the same sound he had heard a moment ago, he was disappointed when the only thing he heard reverted back to the buzzing and in addition, the occasional cawing from crows.

    Had it really been his ears playing tricks on him again? He sincerely hoped that it was not the case, however, upon thinking more rationally, it was indeed highly unlikely that anyone else asides from his father and him would have been lurking in such a sinister location.

   The forested and mountainous terrain that bordered Roschworth was after all rumoured to be teeming with man-eating beasts, and though Brayton swore he had never come across a single such creature in his entire history of hunting there, the rumours often scared off those that were curious about the terrains. Not that he minded usually, for that meant that they had more of the roaming livestock to themselves.

   Yet for that day, somehow the thought of being just one hanging about in the solace of the trees failed to comfort him. He wanted something more abnormal, something that broke out of his daily boring routine.

    He wanted an adventure.

    It soon turned out that the prospect of his desire coming true was not all that far-fetched though. The sounds that trailed after the first one he had heard were a lot more muffled, but having spent his full concentration on the fields trying to detect the sound, he finally managed to pick it up. Confirming that there was indeed something that was being hidden here, he then proceeded onto identifying the source of the soft moans – a task in which he completed in less than a few seconds.

    Brayton made his way in that direction, carefully parting any of the shrubs that lay in his way. With the distance between him and the noise decreasing, he could hear them clearer now, and he had a vague suspicion he knew what lay at the back of his path.

    Human. And he was right, for when he had finally shoved through the last of the green forest thick to come face to face with the source of the sound, he found himself staring right down at a girl lying with her eyes shut against a tree.

    To say she was probably young would not have been an unreasonable guess for her size seemed to indicate it, however the frailness of her physique, the bagginess of the cloak she wore, as well as the dirt that marred her made her appear older, rendering it hard for him to clearly perceive her age. Brayton could hardly be bothered figuring out how old she was though. The foremost thought that he had the moment he spotted her had been how anyone could have been heartless enough to abandon someone in the midst of somewhere so far away from civilisation and concern for her.

     “Hey,” he said as he gently tapped on her shoulder, “hey, wake up.”

     It took a moment of repeated calling before the figure ceased muttering and her eyelids lifted slightly, taking the sight of him in.

     Brayton had no idea what to expect right then, but whatever came next took him by surprise. Unable to register him from her memories, the girl had shot him a confounded look before imploring.

     “Are you a wiccan too?”
     
     A wiccan?

     He stared at her.
     
     “Why do you ask if I’m a wiccan?”

     As far as Brayton was concerned, he loathed wiccans. They were nothing but monsters to him, with their brutal and sinister magic, and they were the reason why humans like him had to live in shambles and fear, the reason why the village his parents once lived in was now riddled in chaos.

    For a moment, he wondered if the frail girl he found was a wiccan, which could have been why she had asked if he was a wiccan, but he soon dismissed the thought. She did not exhibit the traits typically found on one. Her eyes were a dull musty brown, nothing like the exotic silver the wiccans were said to possess, and she also lacked the mysterious aura that seemed to be his defining traits for them. To Brayton, she seemed like an innocent child, one that could do with a bit of feeding and shelter.

     The girl hesitated for a moment, probably debating how much she ought to the stranger she had only just met. In the end, her faith that he could not have meant her any harm won out, and she replied.

    “My parents told me that if I stayed with them, the wiccans would find me and burn me because I’m not like them. They said that I am a scum.”

    “Scum?” Brayton beseeched, his voice ringing higher by a notch.

    He knew the term, but it was not so much of its meaning that startled him rather than its usage. For most of childhood, his father had tried to hide him from learning the existence of the derogatory  word humans in his country were being referred to as. Brayton could hardly imagine any human parents willingly telling their daughter that she was a scum. Though then again, the girl’s parents had abandoned her, by now, nothing should have been surprising to him.

... (to be continued)

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Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Characters

Mercy:
  • Brief background and purpose: The main protagonist. A scum born to a Baron and a witch that was abandoned as a child and raised by the Descent's leader (Sir Claude) to avenge those that were unfairly treated in the past. Her main purpose is to assassinate the new ruler to the country's throne, Varen's son, Van.
  • Personality: She believes in justice however, due to her past upbringing and the way she had been raised in the rebel camp, her opinions are often a biased viewpoint, warped to believe that humans are always the ones who require aid, and that they are the ones that are innocent. This is as they are the species that is being despised, and she on the other hand, had been abandoned by the wiccans (despite also being part of them) when she was younger and feels that all witches are cold heartless creatures. That being said, she is harsh and merciless to anyone whom she feels does not deserve her pity or attention, and paranoid of people with powers. In addition, she is mostly also calm and composed, and is stubborn in the way she thinks. 
  • Looks: Average, with reddish brown hair slightly past her shoulders and dark brown eyes that is slightly almond in shape. She has a slim yet muscular physique due to her upbringing and training, and is 5 ft 4 in height. Not memorable by sight.

Van:
  • Brief background and purpose: The main antagonist (or appears to be as of now) and son of Varen, the previous ruthless ruler of Roschworth. As the son of the ruler, he was trained to lead the country under an iron fist, the same way his father had. However, Van had other plans of what he wanted. When his father died under a sudden circumstance, he was finally given the freedom he dreamed of, and left most of the decision making and ruling to his father's most faithful consorts.  
  • Personality: Scheming, untrustworthy, ruthless like his father had been. Is often paranoid that someone might try and do him in. And thus changes his direct personal attendants and maids monthly so as to not let anyone know too much about him and use it against him. (These jobs are often done by scums as well as they would then have no magical advantages over him.) Unreserved and a bit haughty in his demeanor. Slightly enigmatic.
  • Looks: Has dark brown hair that is cropped slightly below his ears, with a slight stubble across his face, bright green coloured eyes with a hint of silver that becomes a lot more apparent when he uses his powers. Is lean and around the height of 6 ft (taller than most wiccan, that are about 5 ft' 10). Bears the mark of a wiccan on his chest. (In the later parts of the story, his hair will be longer, to his chin.)

Brayton:
  • Brief background and purpose: Son of Claude, leader of the rebel group Descent that aims to get rid of the ruling wiccans. Lost his mother to the wiccans at the age of 3 when they accused her of theft. Was the person who found Mercy when she was abandoned and persuaded his father to take her in. Grows up to be second in command to his father and fully believes in his mission of overthrowing the main ruler - Van.
  • Personality: Like Mercy, feels particularly biased towards all scum, and while he has the tendency to be more bitter, withdrawn and vengeful, he is often gullible and trusting around them. Hateful of wiccans, he believes them to be evil creatures, and that they ought to 'rot in the pits of Uralak', the bottom levels of the Roschworth dungeons, which is said to be the scariest place in the kingdom. He is  generally more serious by nature, though impulsive.
  • Looks: Has slightly wavy brown hair that falls to his chin, brown eyes, and is clean shaven. Also has a lean built, around the height of 6 ft. Is more cordial and sincere looking, and has sometimes been described to own the graceful, regal look of a prince.

Ria:
  • Brief background and purpose: Daughter of Claude's best friend, and likes Brayton. Has always looked up to him ever since he tried to take care of her as a kid at the age of 6, and rescued her from her plight as a slave. Is thus often paired up with Brayton by the elders and said to be a match made by the love spirits. It is suspected however that the feelings are only one sided. Supervises the mission alongside Brayton under Claude's instructions.
  • Personality: Sarcastic, resilient, and generally tries to follow in Brayton's shoes when it comes to dealing with people. ('All friends of Brayton, is a friend of mine, and all enemies of Brayton? You're dead.) Like most of the Descent, is merciless, and quick on her feet. Has the tendency to go insane sometimes however, especially when someone reminds her of her past. (Burn her with witch fire.)
  • Looks: Long blond hair that is wavy, up to her waist, sharp features, and gray eyes. Has a lithe slim built as well, around the height of 5 ft' 8. Bears scars on her back as proof of her nasty past when the wiccans punished her.

Claude: 
  • Brief background and purpose: Ruler of the Descent, and plays a foster father figure to Mercy and the rest of the clan's teens. Having lost his family to the wiccans, he sets up the group to fight for the ill-treated scum. When his wife is later taken away to be imprisoned in Uralak, for stealing, he decides to turn his shelter into a training center to take down those in power, in revenge for what they've done to him.
  • Personality: Harsh, firm, commanding, wise in his ways. He is more often open to his people, outspoken about his ideals and his visions, though he has the tendency to hide his true intentions behind his actions from even his son. Is very driven, though as a result, it makes him narrow-minded. He is willing to do anything, just to attain the right results.
  • Looks: Tall, broad and muscular. With dark brown hair (nearly black) cropped to his ears and brown eyes. Has a short stubble across his face, that is only kept when he is in a good mood.

Sif:
  • Brief background and purpose: An elder from the Descent. Having lived in the time period before Varen ascended the throne of Roschworth, where humans still weld power, he feels unjust over the treatment his people are being subjected to, and thus joins the Descent in order to educate the new members and youths about Roschworth past, and ensure that the future generations of humans are taught to read and write. 
  • Personality: Insightful having seen much in his lifetime before joining the Descent. He is also said to be patient, frequently needing to deal with the newly recruited apprentices. However, like most other scums, he is prejudiced against the witches. 
  • Looks: Wizened, with wrinkly skin, and unkempt straggly white-grey hair that reaches to his neck. Is extremely pale, having cooped himself up in the taverns for the past thirty years. He also has a lean and frail physique, a trait displayed by most scums, especially the old, in the Descent.

Freida: 
  • Brief background and purpose: The matron entrusted with the job of hiring the king's personal maids and training them before sending them to serve the king. While she is also a wiccan, her powers are rather minute, and in certain instances, can even be considered powerless. She only managed to attain the high post of a matron as a result of her father's high position in the wiccan court, and through her faith and worship of King Varen.
  • Personality: Having endured several hardships since young, being a near powerless witch, she grew up mostly hating herself, believing herself to be useless. She thus translates her bad history with the other wiccans by torturing the maids she trains. Despite the fact that she is mostly ill-treated by her own people, she has a blind devotion and faith to the wiccan court, and worships King Varen, the first wiccan to rule Roschworth, for she feels that he reinstated wiccans to their rightful power.
  • Looks: Has a plump figure, with long blonde hair that she often braids up, so as to show her witch mark that is displayed prominently at the back of her neck. This serves as a reminder to other wiccans that while she may not be as powerful as them, she does have wiccan blood, which makes her just as 'noble' as them. She has thin lips and slightly large green eyes which are widely spaced apart. 







World Building

Background:
  • In a time period past the burning and slaying of witches. An alternate universe where folk with supernatural powers (witchcraft) rule over the homo sapiens as a result of mutation. 
  • (This started about a century ago, when the king then had decided to draw upon the powers of witches to help in winning the country's battles. The king then hence had most of the witches he could find registered, and sent to train and harness their abilities. They were given large amounts of money as a reward, for every single battle they helped the king win, and before then, they had turned into a stronger country than before. His wiccan advisor however, feeling that they were merely only pawns to the King's plan, hence manipulated the king (after a couple of years) to declare him as his next heir, before overthrowing him)
  • Ruler of Roschworth is Varen, a ruthless and merciless warlock with large amounts of wealth, who uses his powers to keep his people obedient to him. 
  • As large amounts of Varen's wealth were accumulated through raids of the villages wealth in the past, real crimes by powerful bandits that had a history of being in cahoots with his family are often overlooked.
  • In contrast, the weak (mostly human known as scum or novice witches) offenders are dealt with severely, either by hanging them in public, or by crippling them (if the crime they committed was deemed not as serious). 
  • There are hence hardly any rich humans, for most had been robbed out of their money by the wiccans, while others had fled the guarded regions, choosing to reside in isolation, or as servants and lowly paid workers. A couple of scum who still choose to live within the scrutiny of the wiccans would offer to be test subjects (can be for spells or research), as it often requires sacrifice, and therefore grants their family a higher pay.
  • While warfare has hardly been a threat to the country due to the deadly hand that leads it, the country faces tremendous chaos within, where raiders often fight between themselves, and the weak are oppressed, not given a chance to fight for themselves. 
  • The country is mainly divided into two regions, the flat grounds and the mountainous terrains. Most wiccans live on the flat grounds, where shelter are more easily available and where they have more privileges. The mountainous terrains is rumored to be frequented by man-eating beasts, planted by the wiccans so as to exterminate any trespassing or fleeing humans. However, there have been rare incidents, where humans have managed to get past these beasts and escape to a hidden valley and underground cavern, safe from those hunting them.
  • Climate in Roschworth is mostly seasonal, which means that the people in Roschworth experience all four seasons.
Background:
  • Born to a Baron and his witch wife, it was an unexpected surprise when they discovered that their child, Mercy, was a scum. Her eyes were a dull brown, and her body did not bore the marks of a witch. Knowing the cruelty that their child would be subjected to did anyone else know that their child was unmarked though, they hid the information from everyone else they knew, and pray that with time, their child would prove to turn out just like them, and that the physical differences was all there was between them and her.
  • At the age of eight however, the age where most wiccans would have discovered their gifts, and are then sent to be selected for training, it is confirmed that Mercy is no witch. She has yet to find her gift, and lacks the traits usual wiccans express. The witch committee starts to suspect that something is amidst.
  • Scared of being exploited, and being forced to bear the punishments of sheltering an unregistered scum, Mercy's parents decide to abandon her just outside the borders of Roschworth, a place where it is rumoured a band of also unregistered scum tend to frequent, both for their own good, and Mercy's.
  • It is only two days later that she is finally found by a scum, someone four years older than her, (the rebel's head, Claude's son) and is taken in to be trained the art of defense, so she can serve them when she has grown up. There, she is thought to channel her rage and vengeance at being abandoned into her fighting.
  • The main story starts when Mercy turns 20, and realizes her new mission, is to assassinate Van (the old ruler's son), and return the control of the country to the people who originally settled there. This is so that the future of Roschworth would be more just and fair, and no species would be despised by the ruling class.
* Scum: Humans that bear no witchcraft, or the witch's mark, and live in Roschworth.